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manic pixie dream architect (it's kaveh, sorry) ([personal profile] fussiest) wrote in [community profile] citylogs 2023-07-16 06:42 am (UTC)

Spoilsport. You know those descriptions do nothing. The eyes perceive, but vision begins in the brain - wasn't it you who studied optics? [ the sweeping space of the hallway is, well, not quite sweeping. it has kaveh miss the sun-lit walkway of their shared house back in sumeru city, but there's a simplicity to it that begs for decorations on the walls.

more relevantly: the little nail-holes in the wall here and there that suggest there had been decorations there already. kaveh meanders down the hall, and peeks first into the right-hand bedroom, and then the left.
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In any case, you could recite the most harrowing of tales, and it would end up sounding like a ledger of numbers. That's your special skill. Your descriptions did nothing for the sense of the rooms, the shape of the space and the potential in it.

- ah, you've picked the left-hand one because it get less lighting. Of course you did.

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